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I really was tempted for a second to take that and add more verb to stuff when you changed the tone about two minutes in or so, but keeping it all in a similar atmosphere makes it rather appealing now that I reflect.

The top concern I would have is that I wanted something different to leave off with at the end... I was thinking if you took where the tune changed direction (I don't know exactly when... too lazy to get an exact number) and begin going along to a different idea... I was hoping you would reinvent that at the end and leave the person trailing or finalize it. Perhaps you intended that feeling, but that's what I wanted to hear at the end. Instead... it was a "more of the same" sort of feeling. But even then, it's all so original I really enjoyed it all.